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I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao. I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin , a very beautiful city in Shandong province. I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june in **University,and my major is Science of biology,whitch I am very interested in.
Generally speaking ,I am a hard working student , even though my score is not very good. In the past 4 years,I spend most of my time on study and I have passed CET6,my defects is that I haven’t pass the computer level 2 exam,but my general operation of the computer very skilled and I will try my best to study it.My classmates think that I am a smart person with self-confidence,persistence of everything.
My family always want me to become a teather,yeah,teathing is a good job,but I want to make my life colorful and I want to learn some useful knowledge in my real life. I think your school can make my dream become the truth and your schoo

提问时间：2021-04-01

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已修订,I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao.I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin,a very beautiful city in Shandong province.I will receiv...