题目

段落是英文演讲稿的一部分,除了希望能够修改掉明显的语法错误外,还希望能将语句变得更口语化一点.
Hello,my name is ...,“...” is my case study
As a customer,better service or good price,which is more important?This has been an interesting topic for a long time.
But my case study is to analyze this issue from enterprises' points of view.(这句我觉得我写得不好,我想表达的意思是"而我的case study是用企业的角度来看这个问题.")
That’s why I choose this case study.
This case concerns marketing capabilities
If you search on wiki,you will find a performance but complicated definition
Marketing capability is one of the efficient useful strategies which companies use to expand their businesses and operations.
Also,they acquire this marketing capability to learn customer expectation and market requirement and gain success in the marketplaces.

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

Hello,my name is ...,and my case study is about.As a customer,better service and lower price,which one do you think is more important?This has been an controversial topic for a long time.That is why I...