题目
英语天才请进,我要写一篇英语作文,帮我看一下哪里要修改
作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道
时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚
地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖
事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖散步,看到湖里有一只怪物：它是黑色的,长着三角形的脑袋,圆圆的眼睛,长长的尾巴,它的脖子长约10厘米,它的牙齿很锋利
MrsBessClarke的感受：
以下是我自己写的：
Goodnight everyone .This is th news TV .There has a news about MrsBessClarke ,In 2009 October one night day ,After ,MrsBessClarke has supper ,he went for a walk near the lake ,Suddley ,he saw the ``in the lake ,The ``` body was black And it has a ```,a round eyes ,a long tail ,its fect was 10meters long ,And its teeth was very ``he said .
In the end ,MrsBessClarkefeel he aford of it and he did't belive his eyes
作文：根据下列材料写一篇报道
时间：2009年10月的一天傍晚
地点：MrsBessClarke家的附近湖
事情；MrsBessClarke晚饭过后就到家的附近的湖散步,看到湖里有一只怪物：它是黑色的,长着三角形的脑袋,圆圆的眼睛,长长的尾巴,它的脖子长约10厘米,它的牙齿很锋利
MrsBessClarke的感受：
以下是我自己写的：
Goodnight everyone .This is th news TV .There has a news about MrsBessClarke ,In 2009 October one night day ,After ,MrsBessClarke has supper ,he went for a walk near the lake ,Suddley ,he saw the ``in the lake ,The ``` body was black And it has a ```,a round eyes ,a long tail ,its fect was 10meters long ,And its teeth was very ``he said .
In the end ,MrsBessClarkefeel he aford of it and he did't belive his eyes
提问时间：2021-04-01
答案
This is th news TV 改为This is the news TV .
There has a news about MrsBessClarke 改为There is a news about MrsBessClarke
after后加that
There has a news about MrsBessClarke 改为There is a news about MrsBessClarke
after后加that
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