题目

请大家帮我看下这篇对话语法是有错误.
我想根据《假话真情》那个小品改成一个英语话剧.下面是我翻译的一部分.请大家我帮我看看是否与语法错误?
True lies
Figures(人物)：
Father：Tom（T） Daughter:Susan (S)
Little daughter:Jenny (J) Son:Michel (M)
Aside (旁白) On a sunny morning,old Tom is sitting in a wheel chair.He seems to be sad.
T:Though I am sitting in a wheelchair.I am quite fine.My legs are as strong as twenty years ago.You may asked why you do that.A great question.I have two draughts,Susan,Jenny and a son Michel.Susan is a teacher.Jenny is a singer.And Michel is an owner of a shop.Someone usually says to me,“ Tom,you are so lucky to have so many kids.And all of them are very successful in their own fields.” But I feel lonely now and then.They haven’t visited me for hundreds of years.What I need is quite simple.I want them to stay with me,have a small talk,watch tv ,have a meal.and so on.It’s wonderful .By the way,today is my birthday.I bet they have no idea about that.They completely forget it .yes,they are busy.Busy….So,I prete

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

问题还挺多的,比如How do you sit in a wheelchair?这句,原文应该是“你怎么坐在轮椅上”吧?应该译成“Why are you sitting in a wheelchair?” 好些.还有其他不少地方也是如此,仔细找找看其他类似的错误吧.一篇好的译文,先中译英再英译中与原文应该是相差不大的.