题目

自己写的英文介绍,给点意见
Good morning ,I'm glad to be here for this speech.firsst let me introduce myself.My name is xxxx.It's the first time for me coming here visiting your office.I graduated from shanghai telvison university as a xxx majoring in xxx.It's also a nice university.There're 3 people in my family .You know,my parents and I.We love each other and live a happy life.I ability to work independtly,mature and resourceful.A stable personality and high sense of responsibility are desirable.I initiative ,independent and good ammunication.Have positive work attitude and be willing and able to work diligently without superuision.The main qualities required are prepare work hard ,ability to learn ,ambition dness to and good health.In my spare time ,Ienjoy playing skating ,listining music/camping.That's all,thank you

提问时间：2021-03-29

答案

语言还可以再精简一点.句型有点单调,其他就没什么了