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请麻烦批改这篇高中英语作文
题目大概是:我(李华)从某国外网站上购买了一支录音笔(recording pen),而最近几天发现有质量问题,我要写信给对方反应.1.音质不好 2.使用不方便 3.解决方案:1.退换 2.维修
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麻烦英语教师或者有心的网友帮忙批阅 ,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li hua who purchased a recording pen from your website days ago .And now I find some problems about the product .Here are some description about it.
First,the sound quality of the recording pen is not good so that I can't make myself heared clear before it .Second it is not convenient for me to use even too complex for me .Third ,there's also some little problem that upset me a lot such as the sudden of powering off,heat from the surface of it and so on .
I hope we can check with these for a good solution .Could I back it to your or could you repair it for free I believe your attitude can satisfy us consumer .
Best wishes
题目大概是:我(李华)从某国外网站上购买了一支录音笔(recording pen),而最近几天发现有质量问题,我要写信给对方反应.1.音质不好 2.使用不方便 3.解决方案:1.退换 2.维修
满分:
麻烦英语教师或者有心的网友帮忙批阅 ,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li hua who purchased a recording pen from your website days ago .And now I find some problems about the product .Here are some description about it.
First,the sound quality of the recording pen is not good so that I can't make myself heared clear before it .Second it is not convenient for me to use even too complex for me .Third ,there's also some little problem that upset me a lot such as the sudden of powering off,heat from the surface of it and so on .
I hope we can check with these for a good solution .Could I back it to your or could you repair it for free I believe your attitude can satisfy us consumer .
Best wishes
提问时间:2021-03-25
答案
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li hua who (have)purchased a recording pen from your website days ago . 改为have purchased,使用现在完成时更合理,因为对现在造成了影响.
And now I find some problems about(about-->with) the product . about改成with, with表伴随.
Here are some description about it.(这句话语法没问题,但是不很地道,一般可以省略)
First, the sound quality of the recording pen is not good so that I can't make myself heared clear before it . (so that后面这句我不是很理解你是要表达什么意思,可以向我追问)
Second it is not convenient for me to use even too complex for me .(complex的意思是复杂,用在这里不是很合适,如果要表达使用不方便, it is not convenient for me to use就足够了:))
Third , there's also some little problem(s) that upset me a lot such as the sudden of powering off, heat from the surface of it and so on .(这句话比较长,不是很熟练的话建议拆成短句.such as后可改为:for example, it sometimes powers off suddenly, and the surface of it is often very hot.)
I hope we can check with these for a good solution . Could I (send it )back it to your (your-->you)or could you repair it for free ? I believe your attitude can satisfy us consumer .(back是介词,不能直接用哒~)
Best wishes
I'm Li hua who (have)purchased a recording pen from your website days ago . 改为have purchased,使用现在完成时更合理,因为对现在造成了影响.
And now I find some problems about(about-->with) the product . about改成with, with表伴随.
Here are some description about it.(这句话语法没问题,但是不很地道,一般可以省略)
First, the sound quality of the recording pen is not good so that I can't make myself heared clear before it . (so that后面这句我不是很理解你是要表达什么意思,可以向我追问)
Second it is not convenient for me to use even too complex for me .(complex的意思是复杂,用在这里不是很合适,如果要表达使用不方便, it is not convenient for me to use就足够了:))
Third , there's also some little problem(s) that upset me a lot such as the sudden of powering off, heat from the surface of it and so on .(这句话比较长,不是很熟练的话建议拆成短句.such as后可改为:for example, it sometimes powers off suddenly, and the surface of it is often very hot.)
I hope we can check with these for a good solution . Could I (send it )back it to your (your-->you)or could you repair it for free ? I believe your attitude can satisfy us consumer .(back是介词,不能直接用哒~)
Best wishes
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