题目

英语高手请批改一下这篇文章
这是一篇关于“此地无银三百两”的故事
There is no money in this place
Long,long ago,there was a rich man in a town called Zhang San.
One day,he was stay in his house and looked at his money.He though,’ My house is not big enough to put my money,I must look for a place to put it.’ Soon,he saw the garden and decided to put his money in the garden.
He went to the garden and put the money in the ground.After a minute,he though,’ If a thief come to my house and take my money away,I will become poor.I must tell the thief not to take my money away.’ So he wrote ‘There is no money in this place’ on the wall.
Zhang San has a neighbour called Wang er.He looked it and took the money away.But he was worried about who took away the money.So he wrote ‘Your neighbour has never taken your money.’
How silly the two men was!

提问时间：2021-03-20

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