题目

求大侠们帮忙英语作文改改语法错误,
The cartoon above described a significant phenomenon with a few pens.many people,whether young or old,male or female,are pursuing the same goal-the big stamp which symbolizes the position of a village official.they are so eager for the position that the one symbolizing village teacher is completely ignored and deserted.
the picture reflects that ,people who have used to enjoy the high-grade materical life are hard to stand a village teacher's life which means poor and working hard.further more,the money worship from capitalistic world had an apparently influnence to our country,especially the employment.
in my opinion,in order to realize one's life value,to give is more important than to gain.life is sublimating when paying off,and enjoyment no more than one stage in the process of life.

提问时间：2021-03-19

答案

1 The cartoon above described把described改为describes
2 the one symbolizing去掉one
3 the picture reflects that 后面的逗号去掉
4 have used to enjoy the high-grade materical 把enjoy改为enjoying,materical改为material
5 capitalistic world had an apparently influnence to 把had改为has,apparently改为apparent,to改为on
6 and enjoyment 后面加上is
7 每一句话的首单词的首字母应该大写,不知道你是不是为了输入简化才这样