题目

帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误.单词错了也可以的.
But you know,there is something I believe-- I want to try and live my life,carring all of my memories with me...And even if those memories are painful...Even if they do nothing but hurt me...I want to keep them.Even those memories I sometimes wish I could forget...AS long as I carry them with me...As long as I can keep holding on,then someday...I will be strong enough that those memories don't hurt me anymore...and I'll be glad that I have them...That's what I believe,with all my heart...That's why all of my memories are precious to me,I don't think it would be OK to forget a single one...
如果是对的也请和我说一声谢谢了.错了的话帮我改改吧.

提问时间：2021-03-15

答案

Even if they do nothing but hurt me...
这句最好用过去将来时或一般过去时
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