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一篇新托福IBT作文求改
刚开始准备toefl,大致看了一下作文的要求,写了一篇文章,大概还有40天的样子,提一点意见关于如何提高,
Live in a small town or live in a big city
Nowadays there is much disagreement over that living in a small town or living in a big city.Some people maintain that living in a small town is a better choice as its relaxed atmosphere and fresh air.Other people,however,argue that living in a big city is second to none,for there is more convenient transportation and relatively complete infrastructure.If I have to be forced o make a choice,I will choice the latter one.
In the first place,as I mentioned above,it is the big city’s relatively complete infrastructure that makes me choice to live in a big city.For instance,people in an old age are inclined to be ill and need more medical care.In a big city,there are much more hospitals equipped with high advanced medical devices and experienced doctors than those in the town.Therefore,it can guarantee people especially old people be able to receive properly comprehe

提问时间：2021-03-15

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Live in a small town or live in a big cityNowadays there is much disagreement over living in a small town or living in a big city.Some people maintain that living in a small town is a better choice du...