题目

两篇六级作文希望大家帮我改下语法错误 advantages of studying abroad 和 technology in our life
找了两篇真题写了下
有点乱的没有分段将就着看吧,就改语法部分好了
可以的话顺便帮忙打下分吧,六级作文的话能及格么
THANKS
第一篇
talk about your opinions on the advantages of studying abroad
nowadays,with the increasing number of studying abroad ,take a look around ,aren’t there any friends of your’s doing it it must be because I do.well I suppose there must be many advantages of it.
In my view,studying abroad can not only enable us to get know to the western culture.But also talk to foreign face to face which can promote our spoken skill.
In the other hand,studying abroad can also open our mind since foreigns are so friendly moreover can expand our horizon from the other country .
So if you have the opportunity,well go for it.it’s better for our age to go outside taking some further studying,it ’s far more advantage than study here.
第二篇
the relationship between technology and our life
With the development of technology

提问时间：2021-03-15

答案

第一篇：1、nowadays注意首字母大写,其余也是；2、take a look around放在with the increasing number of studying abroad 前面；3、aren’t there any friends of your’s doing it ?（不用整的的这么复杂）改为are...