题目

帮忙改语法错误 我的语法存在很大问题
The number of full-time students who try to
look for part-time jobs was increasing in the past few years.Some people say
it is detrimental for students’ focusing on learning,they insist that the only
responsibility for students is to learn more acknowledge.The objectors claim that part-time jobs are
beneficial for full-times students,attribute to being able to gather more
social experiences and earn more money.
As I see it,I support that full-time students ought to be permitted to
find some part time jobs,but there should be some preconditions as following:
First and foremost,some relatively poor students are really in need for
part-time jobs,because most of their family can’t afford their high expenses
in university,which means looking for some part-time jobs is the only way out
to finish their college life,after all,not every student could win particular
scholarship.
Secondly,although part-time jobs should be

提问时间：2021-03-12

答案

The number of full-time students who try to look for part-time jobs “has been" increasing in the past few years.Some people say "this is" detrimental for "student whose responsibility is to focus on ...