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英语作业,谁能帮我看看.
Hey,
Tim. I'm glad to receive your email. Your travel was so amazing and wonderful.
In fact, I'm very eager to tell you that I've just returned from TianJin(SP)(>>Tianjin) in China.
We tasted a lot of delicous(SP)(>>delicious) snack and visited lots of famous places.
After we saw a movie, Cold Mountain, filled with affecting actions.
We were deeply affected by the hero who doesn't give up earning his truth love in the war.
Up to now, I still remember a song's name in the movie, 'I wish my baby was born'.
All in all, our travel were great.
I hope we will have a dinner at the weekend.

提问时间：2021-03-11

答案

1\Your travel 是不是逻辑上不对啊?后边可是出现的our travel 2、Tianjin是对的3、very eager 可以删掉very ,eager已经很强烈了4、 After改为then,或者after that5\earning love 搭配不合适,purse 是不是好些6、a so...