题目

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As time goes on,technology becomes an essential part in human’s daily life.Airplane is one of the necessary tool for travel,study and visit families.However,there are another group of public is not comply with it,they believe environment is more important and airplane wastes resources and damages our living places.
On one hand,increasly amount of students are going to overseas to improve their learning and development.Firstly,plane is the only resource to help them go on aboard.Which is faster,safer and easier.In addition,there are many people’s family members immigrate to overseas,so visit them by air would be the only choice.For example,it only takes 11 hours from China to New Zealand.Therefore,students can also go back to their country whenever they prefer.
On the other hand,a long journey costs thousands of petrol,which means earth mother has to provid lots of resources to satisfy human.It is not only give more burdens to the ecology,but also the exhaust

提问时间：2021-02-28

答案

As time goes on,technology becomes an essential part in human’s【改成our或者people‘s吧人类什么的..有点奇怪】 daily life.Airplane is one of the necessary tool【加s哦亲】 for travel【ing】,study【ing...