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In recent years,many young people decide to further their study abroad.Do you think the advantages of study abroad outweigh its disadvantages?
Every morning we open our eyes,we found that we born in this rapidly changing society,in particular,in terms of working and studying etc.if you are an aficionado of the studying abroad “debate”,you have probably read at one time or another that current trends in this controversy shows that there is two opinions in this question,which is treat him as the angel,and other individuals think him is the demon.The way I see it,I am totally agree with this point which is think he is the angel.
Studying abroad may create substantial benefits.To begin with,this practice can help foster a strong sense of achievement in many students when they had fulfilled their school work.Secondly,it is not unrealistic that studying abroad could widen their knowledge and broaden their outlook.Technically,studying abroad could bring far-reaching eff

提问时间：2021-02-22

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首先,你的作文太chinglish了.外国人的表达你应该多注意一下.建议你多去看英文电影学习英文化的表达.其次,在雅思作文中是很注重上下文的连接词的.这个你可以去买一本关于雅思写作的书,书上就给你列了几乎所有常见的连...