题目

请评价一下这篇英语作文
Depenging on the study of English this days,I who used to study mechanics have come up the method of study,for I have some ideas after the researching of the methed of studing English.I think the root of study is memory,as the memory consists of memory by understanding and memory by practice.I expected that there are hardly anyone approve of my opinion,so I will explain it.
According to the category of remenber ,we can classify method as understanding and practice,subjects which need understanding such as maths,mechanics and so on,is used to be thought that the best method of these subjects is understanding,but they do neglected that the method of understanding is the method of memory of these subjects,in the other side of the subjects such as studing piano,badminton and so on,practicing of memory is taken the most important place,for what should be understood consist of nothing ,as it has no reason,what should do to learn is just imitation.do however they do it,pra

提问时间：2021-02-20

答案

还不错.很多句式都用到了.议论文格式也对.只是.可以加一点更加不同的词来表示一个意思,这样就更加好.而且多几句谚语也是画龙点睛的