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In some countries,it is now possible for people to buy a wide variety of foods transported from all over the world.To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?
Throughout the globe,the topic regarding food never halts to trigger public interest.In this context,some people hold the rumours that if every one can buy the food that import from other place will make the difference between countries disappearing.However,others support it is a advantage to both citizens and nations.For my part,I insist the latter argument.
Apparently,far from being and albatross around nation’s leader’s neck,imported food act as a major divers of nation’s economic betterment,with the assistance of civilians can by import foods easily,a multitude cities,be it big-size or small-size,can reduce the budget of public security fee.Since,legions of terrifically nationalism organizations like Neo-Nazism and Skinhead will negate their thoughts and stop

提问时间：2021-02-12

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Throughout the globe, the topic regarding (the) food (has) never (halted) to trigger public interest. In this context, some (individuals) hold（rumours←这个应该删去） that if every one bought the foo...