题目

谁能帮我改一下我写的这篇英语六级作文?
In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people.Some people suggest that learning Eglish at an early age is right,others,however,hold the opposite opinion.
My own experience tells me that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.The reasons are obvious.If a child begins learning Eglish at an early age,his Eglish would be very well when he growed up,but if he begins learning Eglish when he is a middle school student,then his learning of Eglish would be harder and harde than before.Some people claim that learning Eglish at an early age would have a bad effect on learning Chinese,but I dont't think so.In my opinion,the method of learning Eglish is very important,if we have the right methods,that situation wouldn't happen.
For all the reasons above,it is evident that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.

提问时间：2021-02-10

答案

将his learning of Eglish 改为his ability of learning English 会比较好一点