题目

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1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the society is developing quickly nowadays, many people are going to universities and colleges. They also have different reasons of going there as well. However, from my point of view, I believe that most people go to university and college to have some new and different experiences because they can really help students a lot.
First, living in the schools will train students to be independent. When students have to deal with all the things that happened around them, they will have a great training of independence. This experience will be unforgettable and also a great memory for students which will also bring benefits to them in the future. If I am a university or college student, I will definenitely take th

提问时间：2021-02-03

答案

结构是标准式的总分三个point没什么问题,有时间的话可以加个第五段conclusion.然后语法错误比较多,比如说第一段,from my point of view后面再加i believe就重复了；同样的,第二句话,句中有also句尾有as well也是重复了.最后,开头用first second final 很单调,想想下中文翻译出来的感觉也能体会到了.