题目

英语强人来,请改下我的演讲稿,
以下是我的关于"Australia as we know"的演讲稿(可能其中会有些语法错误),改好后请全文发送.
Australia as we know
Australia,the sixth largest country in the world,stands on Oceania.
In the long history river,Australia once was invaded by Britain.At last,it became the colony of Britain.Of course,Australian couldn't stand it.Therefore,they starded to resist.Finally,they succeeded,and Australia had their own National Day,Jan.26th.
Now,Australia has been listed into the Developed Countries(发达国家,不知道有没有拼对).Inaddition,its population has reached nearly 22 million.In other word,Australia has gone into the developed highway(迈入发展的快车道,不知道有没有对).
I strongly believe that the cooperation between Australia and China will get further development.As one of the largest countries in the world.These big countries including Ausralia and China will lead the world to go into the new century.
That's all.
Last but no least,I sincerely thank you for your listening.
Thanks!
请问为什么我在考试写作文时总是得9、10分，上不去，请问就这篇文章而言的我的作文有些什么问题，该如何去改正

提问时间：2021-02-02

答案

Australia as we knowAustralia which is the sixth largest country in the world lies in Oceania.Australia once invaded by Britain does not have a long histroy.and bacame the colony of Britain.People in ...