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英语作文修改【初中】
1.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and many trees around it.In the car to there,I saw lots of flowers grow on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.When I got there,my aunt was standing on front of the door.She’s a frending woman with long hair.We had great lunch,the food was delicious.Finally,we took the bus to come back.I think,the scenery there was beautiful,but the people was the most beautiful.2.Look,we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now,I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is running after my feiend Add.They are having fun.And my sister is writing back to her aunt.The letter has cost her a week.My parents are working out the expenses.To my surprise,my brother is keeping quiet!And,do you kown what am I doing?I’m writing the passage.3.My Happy Vacation.Do you want to know how did I spend my vacation?Well,every day,I got up by 8:00.After breakfast ,it’s time

提问时间：2021-01-27

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.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and there are many trees around it .In the trip there ,I saw lots of flowers growing on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.Getting there,my aunt was standing on front of the door waiting for us.She’s a frending woman with long hair.We had great lunch,the food was delicious.Finally,we took the bus to come back.In my opinion ,the scenery there was beautiful,but the people was the most beautiful.2.Look,we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now,I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is running after my feiend Add.They are having fun.And my sister is writing back to her aunt,which has cost her a week.My parents are working out the expenses.To my surprise,my brother is keeping quiet!And,do you kown what am I doing?I’m writing the passage.3.My Happy Vacation.Do you want to know how did I spend my vacation?Well,every day,I got up by 8:00.After breakfast ,it’s time to do homework.After that,I do some exeicise and go out to have a rest.In the afternoon,I spend one hour sleeping and playing computer.In fact,I always have some other activities.Such as,visiting my friends and going swimming.Howerer,it was a nice holiday.4.My matherMy mother is a good mother and teacher.When we are at home,she always encourages me and never dotes on me.She teachers me how to be a good child.When she is at school,she often helps her students.She found one of her student have a cold last winter,she went to buy medicine soon in such heavy snow.Well,this is her,I love her .5.La dame aux Game lias was wroten by Alexandre dionas Jr.It was an involute story.It is a story about Marguerite’s history which is an exception,and it makes write write:”I love it ,and I have told the reader.It was a duty”.In this history,we know about the ugly world and human greedy.A bout Margueri,she was a lovely but sad woman.She wanted to have love and friends,but she couldn’t.She was in dark times.And the world isn’t yet wolly good,then at lest it becoming better.So,wo shouldn’t afraid of future.We should letus be good,be tum,like the sad woman.
说实话,你的英语功底很好··我是个高中生··作为前辈··我可以说·我在你这个时候绝对写不出这样的文章··但是你的作文里有个很严重的有很简单的语法错误··就是你的主语后面直接加地点状语（When we at home） ··这是作文大忌··很容易让改卷老师你的印象分的··加油··
顺便说一句··敢复制者··滚··这都是我一个字一个字打出来的