题目

下面的英文通顺吗,如果有什么错误,请指正.
What color is the Olympic game in 2008?This is a marvellous problem,different person's treating this problem will also have different answer.
Perhaps athletics the fans will say the Olympic ga athletics me in Peking will be a beauty color of,red is jump about of flames of color,whenever this was the time that a nation jumped up at the time that Olympic flame set alight!Is the time that the race dreams of a realization!Red symbol enthusiasm,that time,Peking of the midsummer of August will with very hot liver to welcome the whole world friend for coming from five lakes!
Also someone will say,the Olympic game in Peking is green.Really,the green is a peaceful symbol,is the body of athletics spirit now in the demonstration.
So,what does the green still represent?That's right,is our living environments,is the color of our global village!
The first of science and technology a long distance of today,people didn't neglect to good care of the environment.In the principle of global village,the green is an eternal topic,so,green Olympics,also became Peking to bid for 2008 the slogan of the Olympic game.
2008年奥运会是什么颜色的呢？这是个奇妙的问题，不同的人对待这个问题也会有不同的答案。
也许体育迷们会说北京的奥运会将是红颜色的，红色是跳动着的火焰的颜色，每当这圣火燃起的时候，是一个国家跳跃的时刻！是民族梦想实现的时刻！红色象征热情，那时，8月的盛夏的北京将以十分的热情来欢迎来自五湖四海的朋友！
也有人会说，北京的奥运会是绿色的。的确，绿色是和平的象征，是体育精神的体现于展示。
那么，绿色还代表什么呢？没错，就是我们的生活环境，是我们地球村的色彩！
科技一日千里的今天，人们并没有忽视对环境的爱护。在地球村的理念中，绿色是永恒的主题，所以，绿色奥运，也成为了北京申办2008年奥运会的口号。

提问时间：2021-01-15

答案

你把你要写的中文意思给我们我们才能批改啊,说实话,你这个好象是用中文一个单词一个单词翻译的.总体来说词语用的很死,不够贴切.你看看第一个句子是一个文句,而你却是用了陈述句的句式.应该把is提前.然后英文和中文是...