题目

请高手看看这篇托福作文能拿多少分啊?
大概估下吧.
题目是Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher.Others think that it is always better to have a teacher.Which do you prefer?Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
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Since everyone has their unique method of learning,whether people should learn with a teacher or not really depends on the person.However,based on my experience,I believe that learning with a teacher will definitely make studying easier.
First of all,having a teacher who has more knowledge in the area you learn than you do to teach you will make studying more effective.It is true that certain group of people can learn by themselves by simply reading the text.However,wouldn’t learning be fun if you have someone to transform the boring text into colorful lectures as well as reading the text?Wouldn’t studying be easier if you have someone to answer your questions?By learning with a teacher,you can actually choose between reading a text yours

提问时间：2021-01-14

答案

条理清晰,但是套用模板痕迹很重,词汇不够高级,不会得到一个很高的分数,中等.
致命的弱点：
1、尽量不用模板,用自己的东西.
2、加强词汇的记忆,从文章看出词汇是你的弱点.多用高级词汇.