题目

高手帮忙修改英语作文--六级 主题是关于送孩子去艺术班的看法.
Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art classes?
More and more children were sent into all kinds of art classes.Of course ,there are more and more art classes were held by all kinds of person or all kinds of education/training group.As there are so much kinds of art classes,the parents want to send their kids to one or more classes.So the children were send into the classes whether they wish or not.
Some people approve send children to art classes,while the others hold the opposite point.The approver think the classes can make the children become more active in their future life and the art abilitiy is also their advantage when they look for a work,especially in the competive world.On the countray,the others think enforce the child to attend the art classes would be a very bad thing,as if the children unwilling to the classes,ti did hurt their heart.Maybe that would have a negative impact on the child's future.
As far as I know ,we must deal the thing very caution.If the children have the gift we could send them to the art classes.Of course,if the children very willing to study in the classes,we should surely send them to the classes.On the other situation,we wolud better not send them to these classes.

提问时间：2021-01-10

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Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art classes?
More and more children ARE sent into all kinds of art classes. Of course , there are more and more art classes HELD by all kinds of PERSONS or all kinds of education/training GROUPS. As there are so MANY kinds of art classes,the parents want to send their kids to one or more classes. So the children were send into the classes NO MATTER they wish or not.
Some people approve THAT THEY SHOULD send children to art classes, while the others hold the opposite point. The approver think the classes can make the children become more active in their future life and the art abilitiy is also their advantage when they look for a work, especially in the competive world. On the countray, the others think TO enforce the child to attend the art classes would be a very bad thing, as if the children ARE unwilling to the classes, IT did hurt their heart. Maybe that would have a negative impact on the child's future.
As far as I know , we must deal the thing very CAREFULLY. If the children have the gift we could send them to the art classes.Of course, if the children ARE very willing to study in the classes, we should surely send them to the classes. On the other situation, we wolud better not send them to these classes.