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Nowadays there is a growing trend for individuals to watch TV.However whether we can benifit from watching TV has become an controversial isse.Therefore I am going to analysis both it's disadvantages and advantages.
Individuals can benifit much by making good use of watching television.The average people can gain amusement and entertainment by watching aome sort of TV program,such as soup or pecking opera.Also,learners can broaden their horizon via watching TV.They can easily discover the international and inland current affairs as soon as possible.Moreover,It is a good chance for children to cultivate their creativity and develop their intelligence by watching some program that are suitble for them,such us cartoon.
However,it is undeniable that too much exposure to watch TV may lead to some certern drawbacks.In terms of health,watching TV can easily cause poor eyeslight,which can certainly influence our study and work.On the other hand,watching TV for such a long time may lead to some serious disease and make people become so called "coath potatos".Furthermore,there are always some harmful information support by TV,such as sextual information or violence,which may influence children's personality.
After weighing all pros and cons,I am totally agree that the benifits outweigh it's drawbacks and we can certainly enjoy ourselves via watching TV.
请帮忙检查一下语法错误.
Nowadays there is a growing trend for individuals to watch TV.However whether we can benifit from watching TV has become an controversial isse.Therefore I am going to analysis both it's disadvantages and advantages.
Individuals can benifit much by making good use of watching television.The average people can gain amusement and entertainment by watching aome sort of TV program,such as soup or pecking opera.Also,learners can broaden their horizon via watching TV.They can easily discover the international and inland current affairs as soon as possible.Moreover,It is a good chance for children to cultivate their creativity and develop their intelligence by watching some program that are suitble for them,such us cartoon.
However,it is undeniable that too much exposure to watch TV may lead to some certern drawbacks.In terms of health,watching TV can easily cause poor eyeslight,which can certainly influence our study and work.On the other hand,watching TV for such a long time may lead to some serious disease and make people become so called "coath potatos".Furthermore,there are always some harmful information support by TV,such as sextual information or violence,which may influence children's personality.
After weighing all pros and cons,I am totally agree that the benifits outweigh it's drawbacks and we can certainly enjoy ourselves via watching TV.
请帮忙检查一下语法错误.
提问时间:2021-01-03
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语法错误嘛,还是自己看吧,考试时6个小错(单词啊,小语法,单复数.)扣0.5分,一个影响句式句意的大错就下一个档次.
语法错误嘛,还是自己看吧,考试时6个小错(单词啊,小语法,单复数.)扣0.5分,一个影响句式句意的大错就下一个档次.
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