题目

74.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Never in human history have we witness so many travel sites available to common people for traveling and this kind of appearance also arouse a debate on whether it is better for people to travel in a group led by a tour guide or travel by themselves.To the extend of my observation i totally agree with the statement that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide cause we will enjoy companionship comfort and safety of group travel,and learn more information about the place from a tour guide.
Firstly ,travel with the group led by a tour guide will let us learning better about the place we visit because we can get explanation in details for what you see from tour guide as they have receipted professional training.so we can have a deeper understanding of travel sites what we cannot have if we travel alone and you will never worry about missing any important spot which will also save our time and money on information search.
Additionally .The travel agency will make a sensible and delicate arrangement for our tour,which definitely will make our tour more comfortable and easeful.I believe the majority of people have had a marvelous experience of travel in a group organized by the travel agency,you don't need to make the reservation for hotel,you don't need to worry about the communication tools,and you even don't worry about where to find a place to have a meal.All the things are under good arrangement and conducting.So you may find yourself more concentrate on the trip itself and enjoy it more.
Finally,you will enjoy the companionship when traveling in a group.Usually there are 20 people in a group,you travel together and play together and share the excitement and feeling about what you see thus you will not feel lonely,maybe you can make several good friends during the trip.
So it is easy for is to draw a conclusion that travel in a group led by a tour guide is the best choice for us .As so many merits it have,more and more people in the world begin to accept this way of traveling,and obtain countless happy and joy from it.

提问时间：2021-01-03

答案

感觉你模板好严重,一定要有自己东西,多举例子.（美国佬最喜欢这个,最好举自己的）
字数也少了,估计拿个fair.