题目

我写了一篇迎世博演讲稿,高人帮我看看啊,
Shanghai just after the fifth anniversary of schonborn success,we have ushered in the Shanghai World Expo Mascot "sea treasure" of the birth.From 1851 the first London Expo 2005 Aichi Expo in Japan,has passed the 154 human years,the world has undergone enormous changes.The progress of human civilization and improving the lives of brilliant ideas can not be separated,and the World Expo is the display of these innovative and important stage of civilization.
Expo to target the implementation of the "Shanghai World Expo Ying-civilization plan of action" and "City,Better Life" is the theme of the vivid reflection of the success is an important guarantee for the World Expo,Shanghai is also a spiritual An important review.The traffic is a window of the image of the city,the city's traffic order,a direct reflection of the city's image.
In our daily life,people often tell their children "red light green line stop,go crosswalk line," but in real life,but there are still many parents,in their own Luanchuanmalu.Therefore,"Ying-Expo,civilization",we have to allow "the City,Better Life" is fully reflected in the theme,it is necessary to civilization from the beginning of the road and completely get rid of our bad habits.
Journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.Let us work together in the 2010 Shanghai World Expo at the meeting,to show the world fully into a modern international metropolis it look new
中文
刚刚过了上海申博成功五周年纪念日,我们又迎来了上海世博吉祥物“海宝”的诞生.从1851年第一届英国伦敦世博会到2005年日本爱知世博会,人类已经走过了154年,世界也发生了翻天覆地的变化.人类文明的进步和生活的改善离不开精彩的创意,而世博会正是展示这些创意和文明的重要舞台.
以世博会为目标,实施《上海迎世博文明行动计划》,是“城市,让生活更美好”这一主题的生动体现,是成功举办世博会的重要保证,也是对上海城市精神文明的重要检阅.而交通又是城市形象的一个窗口,城市交通的秩序,直接反映着城市的形象.
在我们日常生活中,大人们常常告诉孩子“红灯停绿灯行,要走人行横道线”,可是在实际生活中,却依旧有许多家长,自己在乱穿马路.因此“迎世博,文明行”,我们要让“城市,让生活更美好”这一主题得到充分体现,就必须从文明行路开始,彻底革除我们的陋习.
千里之行始于足下.让我们携手在2010年上海世博会上,向世人充分展现出现代化国际大都市的崭新风貌吧!

提问时间：2021-01-02

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