题目
谁能帮我把这篇文章改得更口语化些
Hello,my name is Zhou Zhixuan.
I’m18 year old and I’m graduated from Luxun senior high school.
It ‘s a great honor for me to have this interview.
I’m engaged in the Heat energy conversion professional,but I’d like to study a better Professional.I’m interested in electronics,which is very practical,covering a lot of areas,having a great future.
Moreover,I am capable of enduring high pressure of learning,and I think I can have a perfect study environment in this area.
Last but not least,I’m very appreciated to the rigorous and precision in German manufacturing.
My question is,
What’s the most difficult subject in your professional?
As the professional puts emphasis on the study of German,do you have arrangements of studying English and Remedial classes of the English level 4/6?
Hello,my name is Zhou Zhixuan.
I’m18 year old and I’m graduated from Luxun senior high school.
It ‘s a great honor for me to have this interview.
I’m engaged in the Heat energy conversion professional,but I’d like to study a better Professional.I’m interested in electronics,which is very practical,covering a lot of areas,having a great future.
Moreover,I am capable of enduring high pressure of learning,and I think I can have a perfect study environment in this area.
Last but not least,I’m very appreciated to the rigorous and precision in German manufacturing.
My question is,
What’s the most difficult subject in your professional?
As the professional puts emphasis on the study of German,do you have arrangements of studying English and Remedial classes of the English level 4/6?
提问时间:2020-12-13
答案
箭头后面是我建议修改的,口语化其实也就是将事情叙述的简便化,包括用词和造句.以上是个人的理解.
Hello,my name is Zhou Zhixuan.---》 Hello,I'm Zhou Zhixuan.
I'm18 year old and I'm graduated from Luxun senior high school.---》I'm 18 and graduated from Luxun senior high school.
It's a great honor for me to have this interview.---》I feel honored to have this interview.
I'm engaged in the Heat energy conversion professional,but I'd like to study a better Professional.I'm interested in electronics,which is very practical,covering a lot of areas,having a great future.---》I' m busy in the Heat energy conversion,learning that electronics is rather practical and widely-used,so it is having a greater future for me to study this professional.
Moreover,I am capable of enduring high pressure of learning,and I think I can have a perfect study environment in this area.---》besides that,I can endure high pressure of learning,and I think the study environment in this area is perfect as well.
Last but not least,I'm very appreciated to the rigorous and precision in German manufacturing.---》above all,I' appreciate the rigour and precision in German manufacturing.
My question is,
What's the most difficult subject in your professional?---》what's the hardest subject in your professional?
As the professional puts emphasis on the study of German,do you have arrangements of studying English and Remedial classes of the English level 4/6?---》As the professiona stresses the German study,do you arrange to study English and its level Remedial classes,like level 4/6?
Hello,my name is Zhou Zhixuan.---》 Hello,I'm Zhou Zhixuan.
I'm18 year old and I'm graduated from Luxun senior high school.---》I'm 18 and graduated from Luxun senior high school.
It's a great honor for me to have this interview.---》I feel honored to have this interview.
I'm engaged in the Heat energy conversion professional,but I'd like to study a better Professional.I'm interested in electronics,which is very practical,covering a lot of areas,having a great future.---》I' m busy in the Heat energy conversion,learning that electronics is rather practical and widely-used,so it is having a greater future for me to study this professional.
Moreover,I am capable of enduring high pressure of learning,and I think I can have a perfect study environment in this area.---》besides that,I can endure high pressure of learning,and I think the study environment in this area is perfect as well.
Last but not least,I'm very appreciated to the rigorous and precision in German manufacturing.---》above all,I' appreciate the rigour and precision in German manufacturing.
My question is,
What's the most difficult subject in your professional?---》what's the hardest subject in your professional?
As the professional puts emphasis on the study of German,do you have arrangements of studying English and Remedial classes of the English level 4/6?---》As the professiona stresses the German study,do you arrange to study English and its level Remedial classes,like level 4/6?
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