题目

懂英语的指点,这些话是不是这么说呢?
Today is April 13
Sunny
Today I always stayed at home,and in the evening went out to buy some food.Full up,want to use English to write some diary.Today is the one first time and also do not know will not be writed a joke.
ok.The first time will write this a few words of it.
we must be study harder

提问时间：2020-12-08

答案

这是中国式的英语,有很多语法错误.首先第一句你是想表达你一整天都待在家吗?如果是的话应该是I stayed at home all day long.后面一句需要在in the evening后面加一个主语I,再后面一句也是缺了主语,英语中,一句完整的句子必须有主语和谓语构成,如果谓语是及物动词的话还必须要有宾语.所以那句话建议改成：I want to keep my diary in English.再后面一句建议改成Today I kept my diary in English for the first time.I do not know whether it will be a joke or not.写日记我只记得keep a diary,能不能用write不清楚因为从来从来没有用过,就算能用你那句句子还是错的,write-wrote-written,没有writed这种形式的,建议好好背一下不规则动词的过去式和过去分词,再下面一句也不对,建议改为I will write only a little because today is the first day I keep my diary in Enlish.最后一句还是不对,be和study都是谓语动词,一句句子只能有一个谓语动词,所以应该把be去掉,改成We must study harder.总的来说感觉楼主语法方面比较薄弱,建议先买几本语法书看下,从最基本的语法结构看起,写好一篇英语文章需要的是庞大却又灵魂的词汇和娴熟的语法技巧,最不可取的就是以中文的模式去思考英文,毕竟属于不同的语种,差别是很大的,爪机党手打不容易啊,况且明天还期中考,望楼主采纳啊!加分啊!