题目

谁能帮我改一下这篇英语文章!
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
There are some advice for you .fristly,you can take a Chinese course to improve you Chinese skill.secondly,it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,because it’s good to leave you in Chinese enviroment.Apart from these,singing Chinese songs is a good idea and make some Chinese friends.
Finally ,speaking loudly is important key.
Wiating for you good news,

提问时间：2020-12-07

答案

you can take a Chinese course to improve you Chinese skill.第二个有改为your,first 用firstly是没问题的,很多人都是这样,it’s usefull to read Chinese magazine and TV show,useful后加for you 会好一点,不加...