题目

·麻烦帮我改一下这篇雅思A类大作文
An American film actor once said,“Tomorrow is important and precious.”Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present.Do you agree or disagree?
While the rhythm of people’s living is speeding up,there’re rapid changes in all aspects of our everyday lives.However,whether tomorrow is more important and precious than today has become a complex and sensitive topic issue .Personally ,I adhere to the opinion that the two consideration are intrinsically interdependent and indispensable.
On the one hand ,the present play a vital role in the future .I nitially ,it is generally accepted that today is the foundation of tomorrow .Given the significance of the present,at that moment we should try our best to lay a solid foundation for the way we live ,learn ,work and play .Additionally ,if we just focus on what we will have ,and ignore what we should do now ,we will surely receive a heavy blow and fatally fail to re

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答案

mary***_**@163.COM 这是一个环球的雅思老师的邮箱
当时我在环球买了一张120块的作文批改卡,可以批6篇,我只批了3篇就去考试了,作文从5提到6,觉得很有用
你把你的作文发她邮箱里,她会批得很细心的,还能批3篇呢
你发我个百度消息,我把我的邮箱留给你,这样你就可以用我的作文批改卡了