题目

四级作文,请高手修改,
1.本社团的主要活动内容
2.加入本社团的优势
3.如何加入本社团
ladies and gentlemen,welcome to join our club which is named English Expoler.Now,I'm very pleasure to introduce you about main acitivity of our culb.First of all,we will take a party to understand each other in 7-203 on next sunday,and we will comunicate with everyone in English.Second,you will be required to attend a hiking in next month,just take yourself and we will prepare all you need.Then,we will hold a speech comperion about how to protect out environment.
If you join our club ,you will touch more English lover ,and if you are also a English lover,it,s must be pettry choice for you.What's more,you will get more knowledge about English nature which donn't learn from you lesson.
How to attend our club?I will be honour to tell you ,leave your name and cellphone number ,Li Ming,a header of our club,will contact with you later .Thank you very much.

提问时间：2020-10-25

答案

1、pleasure改为pleased/delighted/happy,pleasure只能做名词或动词,不可用作adj..2、introduce you about中的about去掉,这里得提到,introduce的短语为introduce sth.to sb./introduce sb.sth..且about同为介词,语法...