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Sayings to Pride
With the passage of time,peace is the trend of the world.Will there be wars?Will there be fights?Furthermore,will there be racial discrimination?
To my mind,what peace means is that you can have some differences on opinions and you can deal with them through communication such as business communication and negotiation but not force.We can find a double win negotiation.In a word,peace is no war,no fighting and no racial discrimination except different views and competition.
From the film Pride,I can see that because of the racial discrimination,it stimulates the blacks to prove that they have the same abilities or better than the whites.Why must they be looked at in a different way?Is it the skin that makes it different?However,what is the most important thing is the spirit.In the film,I like the coach.He says:” Proud Determination Relentless.” It is the reason why the team is called PDR.In their first match,the team is very proud.They think they are good enough,but it is not true,so they fail.After the inspiration of the coach,they begin to practice hard in order to gain the respect.After a series of spirit’s train,they finally win the game and gain the respect.It makes us think more.I just remember the sentence:” People help people who help themselves.”
Through the film,I can feel the love from the team.A team work means that you must do your best to put yourself into the team.You must help the other team members,and you can’t be late to make others wait for you.If you do so,you waste others’ time.It is said that you don’t respect others.Only when you respect others,others will respect you.
Somehow,from the film it makes me think more.And it also encourages me to strengthen myself.Maybe I can’t express all I had gained in my heart.But it is good to me.Sometimes we should watch a inspirational movie to keep us in a right road.

提问时间：2020-10-15

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Sayings to Pride
With the passage of time,peace is the trend of the world.Will there be wars or fights?Furthermore,will there be racial discrimination?
To my mind,what peace means is that you can have some differences on opinions and you can also deal with them through communication such as doing business and negotiation instead of force.We are sure to find a double win negotiation.In a word,peace is possible,different views and competition can give the world more hope instead of wars,fightings or racial discrimination.
I can tell that from the film "Pride" because of the racial discrimination,it stimulates the blacks to prove that they have the same abilities or even better than the whites do.So why must they be looked at in a different way?Is it the skin that makes they different?However,the most biggest problem is in the spirit.I like the coach in the film.He says:” Proud Determination Relentless.” It is the reason why the team is called PDR.In their first match,the team is very proud.They think they are good enough,but it is not the truth,so they fail in the end.After the inspiration of the coach,they begin to practice hard in order to gain the respect.After a series of spirit train,they finally win the game and gain the respect the desire.It makes me think more.I just remember the sentence:” People help people who help themselves.”
I can feel the courage from the team.Team work means that you must put your whole self into the team and at the same time help others of the team,and shouldn't make others wait to avoid other people think you do not respect them for your wasting their’ time .Others will only respect you when you respect them .
The film makes me think more and encourages me to strengthen myself.Maybe I can’t express all I had gained from it in my heart.But the film is really good to me.Sometimes we all should try to watch an inspirational movie to give us useful spirit in our life.