题目

帮我检查一下英语日记,
日记要过去时吗?
文章：Date,August14th Weather,Sunny
Today is the forth day in the Jeju,Korea.We can rest a half day.In the morning,we drunk porridge.It wasn’t sumptuous.Then,we go to a beach.And we visited the Yongdusan.It was a big stone,like a dragon.We took a lot of photos with it.My friend found a crab.He caught it.It was so small.After that,we go to a mountain.It was.We didn’t climb it.We didn’t have more time.It was behind an ocean.We saw a speedboat on the water.Then,we go to a village.It was very old.Some people life in there.At noon,we ate roast.They were pork.I loved them.They were delicious.There were many people ate lunch.In the afternoon,we watched others marching bands’ play.They were the best.They were wonderful.The marching band form U.S.A was a gorgeous marching band.Tomorrow,we will join the final match; I wish we can get the first,good luck!
had no time!

提问时间：2020-10-12

答案

Today is the forth day in Jeju, Korea.(专有地名前不加THE）We can rest for(一段时间之前加介词FOR） a half day. In the morning（同一句无连接词逗号不必要）we had（这里的喝稀饭用have更地道）some(没有语法...