题目

大家帮我看看对不对八年级上册英语第一单元SectionB 3a
...but I'm pretty healthy.I exercise every day,usually when I come home from school.My eating habits are pretty good.I try to eat a lot of vegetables.I eat fruit and drink milk every day.I never drink coffee.Of course,I love junk food too,and I eat it two or three times a week.Oh,and I sleep nine hours every night.So you see,I look after my health.And my healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades.Good food and exercise help me to study better.
有没有哪里打错啊?

提问时间：2020-10-04

答案

注意大写.of course改成but更通顺
I exercise every day,usually when I come home from school
最好改成after的举行 你不可能一边回家一边运动吧...