题目
文章有木有语法错误?When I remember that story,I was so happy.This summer holiday ,I went to
文章有木有语法错误?
When I remember that story,I was so happy.
This summer holiday ,I went to Dunhuang with my father.I went to visit the Mogao Grottoes,Crescent Lake,Mingsha Mountain which was very amazing and beautiful.One day at noon,we went to eat wonton.My father went outside for a while,but when he came.'What is my bowl 'My father surprised.I looked he,and smiled happily.The reason was funny.My father went outside,the waitress found no one near the bowl.So she cleaned the table,and fell down the wonton which my father didn't finish.
How interesting the travel was!
文章有木有语法错误?
When I remember that story,I was so happy.
This summer holiday ,I went to Dunhuang with my father.I went to visit the Mogao Grottoes,Crescent Lake,Mingsha Mountain which was very amazing and beautiful.One day at noon,we went to eat wonton.My father went outside for a while,but when he came.'What is my bowl 'My father surprised.I looked he,and smiled happily.The reason was funny.My father went outside,the waitress found no one near the bowl.So she cleaned the table,and fell down the wonton which my father didn't finish.
How interesting the travel was!
提问时间:2020-10-01
答案
好像有不少,文章也不大通顺.
I was so happy,是过去式,所以前面也应该过去式,when i remembered that story;
I went to visit the .,后面总共跟了三个地方,是复数,所以应该是用which were;
"what is my bowl?",应该为“where is my bowl”,意思是我的碗哪里去了;
I looked he,he 应该用him,前面应该再加个 at;
另外 fell down 这个词应该不大对,改成removed 更贴切一些,
did't,我认为应该用hadn't.
个人见解,
I was so happy,是过去式,所以前面也应该过去式,when i remembered that story;
I went to visit the .,后面总共跟了三个地方,是复数,所以应该是用which were;
"what is my bowl?",应该为“where is my bowl”,意思是我的碗哪里去了;
I looked he,he 应该用him,前面应该再加个 at;
另外 fell down 这个词应该不大对,改成removed 更贴切一些,
did't,我认为应该用hadn't.
个人见解,
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