题目

弗罗斯特的诗The Road Not Taken两种译文,谁译得更好?
原文：
The Road Not Taken
by Robert Frost
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler,long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrown.
Then took the other,as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same.
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black
Oh,I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should even come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood,and I---
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference
一条未走的路
（美）弗罗斯特 方平 译
深黄的林子里有两条岔开的路,
很遗憾,我,一个过路人,
没法同时踏上两条征途,
伫立好久,我向一条路远远望去,
直到它打弯

提问时间：2020-08-08

答案

下面的翻译更好,教科书上也是下面那种翻译,为什么好?好在哪呢?我认为不仅仅是诗的意境高超,而且在翻译的表达上遵循着不破坏诗句的原则,翻译起来给人以优美,爽朗的感觉,这大概就是顾子欣翻译诗歌的独到之处.