题目
一篇英语演讲稿,请帮忙修改.
Hello,everyone
My topic today is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination.My aim is the Baoan high school.
Because Baoan high school has a comfortable situation for me to study.and it is also near my home.
But the main reason is the teachers in Baoan high school are always stricting with students.
Baoan high school is not only my aim,but also my parents' hope.
For these reasons,i will do my best to finish my aim.I believe nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.
That's all.thank you for listening.
检查一下有没有语法错,单词拼写错误或者有什么新的提议把某个词换成更好的,但是我希望能够使全班大部分的同学都能听懂我在说什么.
谢谢了!
Hello,everyone
My topic today is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination.My aim is the Baoan high school.
Because Baoan high school has a comfortable situation for me to study.and it is also near my home.
But the main reason is the teachers in Baoan high school are always stricting with students.
Baoan high school is not only my aim,but also my parents' hope.
For these reasons,i will do my best to finish my aim.I believe nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.
That's all.thank you for listening.
检查一下有没有语法错,单词拼写错误或者有什么新的提议把某个词换成更好的,但是我希望能够使全班大部分的同学都能听懂我在说什么.
谢谢了!
提问时间:2020-08-05
答案
你好我是初三的一位学生 我觉得你用的语法会不会太简单啦?还是你怕错误才用简单的语句的.我想你最好能用点从句 既然是演讲稿就要有点水平自己也有面子嘛我给你举个例子吧 我只是建议啊 毕竟我不是专业的
我觉得你开头有点太废话也有点死板 能缩点吗 以从句来增加文章的长度
today’s topic is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination .my ideal
school is the Baoan high school for it‘s comfortable situation and system.我就给你举这么个列子 你自己在看看 因为没个人的想发不一样 反正 你不要老用简单句嘛
我觉得你开头有点太废话也有点死板 能缩点吗 以从句来增加文章的长度
today’s topic is the aim of Senior High School Entrance Examination .my ideal
school is the Baoan high school for it‘s comfortable situation and system.我就给你举这么个列子 你自己在看看 因为没个人的想发不一样 反正 你不要老用简单句嘛
举一反三
我想写一篇关于奥巴马的演讲的文章,写哪一篇好呢?为什么好
奥巴马演讲不用看稿子.为什么中国领导演讲要看?
想找英语初三上学期的首字母填空练习……
英语翻译
1,人们染上烟瘾,最终因吸烟使自己丧命.
最新试题
- 1一个批发兼零售的文具店规定:凡一次购买铅笔300枝以上,(不包括300枝),可以按批发价付款,购买300枝以下,(包括300枝)只能按零售价付款.小明来该店购买铅笔,如果给八年级学生
- 2attach A to B
- 3怎么区分多血质和胆汁质的人呢?
- 4edison spent a lot of time ___the experiment
- 5描写人悲痛心情的词语
- 6设a、b为多少使得六位数a2000b能被26整除?如达到要求,
- 7找有机物的二氯取代物有几种,这个应该怎么看,还有苯环上的二氯取代物,或者是大长链烃的二氯取代物
- 8take your
- 9用3个长为5dm,宽3dm,高2dm的长方体拼成一个表面积最小的长方体,这个长方体的表面积是____________
- 10电子在磁场中运动的能量问题
热门考点