题目

我写了一篇英语作文,
My Best Friend
I have many friend,among them,my best friend is my monitor-Tony.He looks like a famous singer and he is also very handsome.He is a hard-working student.We are good at different subjects on study.So sometimes we talk over the problems.He is always ready to help others and try his best to help the classmates when they're in trouble.Therefore,I think of he is a kind and honest person.I with to keep the friendship between Tony and I forever.

提问时间：2020-08-04

答案

I have many friend中friend加s
He is always ready to help others and try his best to help the classmates when they're in trouble. 中try应用三单,tries.
I think of he is a kind and honest person. 把of改为that
I with to keep the friendship between Tony and I forever. with改为wish
另外把Tony and I 改为tony and me岂不更好?
文中运用衔接词较好.若注意细节,你的文中应该会更成功!