题目

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书面表达（满分 25 分）

社会弱势群体一般具有四个特征：1、无职或低职；2、贫困；３、软弱可欺；4、常被忽视。
请根据所提供文字及图片提示给某英文报写一篇短文，分析弱势群体构成，描述该群体生存现状，简要分析原因，并提出建议号召社会关注这个群体。
注意：1. 仔细品味所提供文字和图片，不要作简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Let’s care for the disadvantaged
As is frequently seen in our daily life,......________________________________________
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答案

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Possible version:
As is frequently seen in our daily life, the disadvantaged exist in every corner. They are a threat to the construction of a harmonious society, causing growing concern from all.
As the term is defined, those who lack abilities to make a living, like the disabled, the old, the poor etc, make up the disadvantaged. There is no difficulty analyzing the common problems they share. As they are disadvantaged, without doubt, job hunting becomes a headache, which worsens their life or even makes it in despair. Naturally, poverty follows and they are sometimes bullied. Even if some can do certain jobs, as long as they belong to the disadvantaged, they are easily ignored.
Governments should certainly take the major responsibility for caring for those disadvantaged. Daily necessities like food and shelters should be provided for their recent survival as well as constructing hospitals and schools to ensure their future. We students should always have a kind heart towards them. What you do may seem little to yourself, but it surely makes a difference to the disadvantaged.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文，首先要认真阅读题目以及品味图画内容。社会弱势群体一般具有四个特征：1、无职或低职；2、贫困；３、软弱可欺；4、常被忽视。请根据所提供文字及图片提示给某英文报写一篇短文，分析弱势群体构成，描述该群体生存现状，简要分析原因，并提出建议号召社会关注这个群体，所以需要用第三人称，一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，注意仔细品味所提供文字和图片，不要作简单描述。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意字数150左右，不要太多也不要太少。
点评：本文属于图画类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。