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阅读下面一则新闻和一副图片
家人朋友同事聚会吃饭，以前其乐融融一起天南海北地扯，现在随着智能手机的流行，出现了一种“怪现象”：一桌子人一起吃饭，大家少有交谈，都围着餐桌玩起了手机。这样的现象你身边有吗？
《广州日报》就“饭局聚会大家都在玩手机，你怎么看?”进行了读者调查，调查结果显示，很多读者表示对此现象无法忍受，他们认为“饭局是大家面对面的社交场合，每个人都玩手机，和对着虚拟世界没什么两样”;而认为能够忍受的人则觉得，玩手机确实能缓解压力和与人交往带来的不适。

请根据此新闻和图片写一篇不少于120词的文章，内容包括：
简要描述图片和新闻中的社会现象；2. 分析产生此现象的原因 3谈谈你的看法和建议
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Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones (智能手机), …

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Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones (智能手机), it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Some people may lack the ability to communicate with others or the common interest while others claim that it’s a good way to relieve stress and embarrassment in social communications. Naturally, there are still others who are heavy smart phone users and fail to break away from the addiction.
As far as I’m concerned, it is essential for us to build closer social bonds through face-to-face conversations when getting together with our relatives, friends, classmates and colleagues. I strongly recommend that you put away your smart phones in such occasions not only to show respect for others but also to enjoy the gatherings and improve your communicative skills as well.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，反映了因为智能手机的流行，人们忽视了现实社会的人与人交流的问题，写作时要认真读图，不要仅仅对图画进行描述，也要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是使用了词组和多变的句式，适当使用了高中的语法知识：account for“解释，是…的原因”， As far as I’m concerned,“据我所知”， it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. 这句话用了现在分词和独立主格结构，As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和with符合结构， Some people may lack the ability to communicate with others or the common interest while others claim that it’s a good way to relieve stress and embarrassment in social communications. 这句话用了while表示对比，和it做形式主语，Naturally, there are still others who are heavy smart phone users and fail to break away from the addiction.这句话用了定语从句， it is essential for us to build closer social bonds through face-to-face conversations when getting together with our relatives, friends, classmates and colleagues. 这句话用了状语从句的省略句，I strongly recommend that you put away your smart phones in such occasions not only to show respect for others but also to enjoy the gatherings and improve your communicative skills as well.这句话用了not only…but also结构。