题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

假设而是李华，刚刚收到英国笔友Andy给你寄来的生日礼物。
请根据以下要点提示给Andy写一封电子邮件。
1．表达诚挚的谢意；2．询问Andy的近况；;3．祝Andy学业进步。
注意：1．词数100左右；2。可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Andy,
                                                                           
Yours,

答案

Dear Andy,
You really gave me a nice surprise on my big day, Thank you so much for your gift．I love it!
How is everything going with you? What are you studying? If you have time, please write to me about your classmates, your teachers and the interesting activities in your school． I’d like to know everything in your high school life． I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Thanks again for your wonderful gift． Best wishes for good health and great success in your studies．
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。