题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

陈若琳，1992年12月12日生于江苏南通。4岁开始练习跳水。她克服困难，艰苦训练。拼搏精神指引她成功，在2012年伦敦奥运会上获得两枚金牌。请你结合陈若琳的实例，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对拼搏精神的看法。

拼搏精神的意义	1．激励我们直面困难；
	2．竭力实现目标，走向成功；
	……
如何培养拼搏精神	1．要坚信人人都有获得成功的潜力；
	2．遇到挫折不气馁，从失败中学习；
	……

 
注意：1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2．词数150左右；
3．参考词汇：拼搏精神 determination 培养  cultivate   挫折     setback

答案

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Born in Nantong, Jiangsu Province on December 12, 1992, Chen Ruolin took up diving at the age of four. Since then, she has been training hard and overcoming whatever difficulty. She won two gold medals at the 2012 London Olympic Games. It is her great determination that has led her to success.
In my opinion, determination is very important in our lives. It encourages us to move forward, especially during our hard times. This quality enables us to face difficulty bravely and never run away from it. Thus we can stick to our goals and succeed eventually.
It is not easy to cultivate determination. Above all, we must hold a belief that everyone has the potential to achieve success. We shouldn’t be discouraged when faced with setbacks. Actually, failure can teach us a lot. What’s more, there are quite a few people with this spirit around us. We can learn a lot from them.

解析

试题分析：1. 仔细审题。根据写作任务，要求学生认真审读提纲，领会意图，捕捉信息，确定文章时态及体裁。2. 撰写提纲。构思文章要点，写出每个段落主题句、关键词，然后确定细节和内容要点。3. 简写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后，开始写作，有意识地使用固定句型、关联词，把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体，形成基本连贯的初稿。复查是书面表达不可缺少的环节。要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。
点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。