题目

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请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。

答案

My desk-mate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.
One day, where we learned the new word “eccentric”in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him” . Hearing this ,the whole class burst int laughter and my desk-mate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my desk-mate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.
Not until then did I realize words could he powerful in both positive and negative ways . We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.

解析

这是一篇开放式作文，给出写作的事例：We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.我们都知道，“棍棒和石头可能会打断我们的骨头。”但是我们也应该意识到，语言也能伤害人和写作要求，①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。这样就要求考生运用生活中的事例来解释说明文章所列出的这一句话，范文中运用作者用“eccentric”这个生词造句时，说“my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him”伤害了同桌。来说明语言也能伤害人。
本文中多次使用了较高级的语法结构，比如：I volunteered to do it by saying “my desk-mate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him” . 本句使用了by saying短语，同时又使用了定语从句： whose clothes never fit him。
Hearing this ,the whole class burst int laughter and my desk-mate’s face turned red本句中使用了现在分词短语表伴随。以及较高级的句法： I learned from the teacher that my desk-mate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. 本句中首先使用了that引导的宾语从句，同时又使用了if 引导的条件状语从句。
【考点定位】考查阅读和运用语言的能力。