题目

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开学之初，学校讲政治校园中一些不文明的行为，假如你是班长，请根据以下要点准备一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁同学们规范自己的行为，做文明学生。
列举一些不文明行为以及影响，如：乱丢垃圾，随地吐痰，乱涂，大声喧哗，打架等。
2. 怎样改善这种状况。（至少两点）
注意：1. 词数：100左右，开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文明的 civilized  乱涂 scribble  
Dear fellow classmates,
It’s a great pleasure for me to make a speech here.                                       
                                                                                  
That’s all. Thank you.

答案

Dear fellow classmates,
It’s a great pleasure for me to make a speech here. With the new term coming, we’re happy to be back at school and hope to see our school take on a new look. To keep our school beautiful, we should avoid such behavior as spitting, littering, and scribbling in public places. Occasionally, some of us talk loudly, quarrel with others or even do dangerous things, all of which can harm the harmonious and quiet atmosphere of our school.
As we know, civilized behavior is of great importance. It not only shows our good qualities but also makes us live and study happily at school, so we should obey the school rules and behave well. Only by doing so can we live a more comfortable life on campus.
That’s all. Thank you.

解析

试题分析：考查演讲稿的写作。以班长的名义准备一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁同学们规范自己的行为，做文明学生。要点都已经给出，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】With the new term coming, we’re happy to be back at school and hope to see our school take on a new look.这句话是with复合结构，To keep our school beautiful, we should avoid such behavior as spitting, littering, and scribbling in public places. 这句话是不定式做目的状语，Occasionally, some of us talk loudly, quarrel with others or even do dangerous things, all of which can harm the harmonious and quiet atmosphere of our school.这是非限制性定语从句，
As we know, civilized behavior is of great importance. 这句话也是非限制性定语从句，It not only shows our good qualities but also makes us live and study happily at school, so we should obey the school rules and behave well.这句话用了not only…but also…，Only by doing so can we live a more comfortable life on campus.这句话用的是倒装句。