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假设你是李华，你的英国同学Emily来信让你建议在中国云南旅游的一些必到之处。请根据以下提示给Emily写封建议信，要点包括：
1.可到丽江小镇。这里海拔约2500米，在这里体验纳西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的户外酒吧(bar)。
2.再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）这里每年都吸引数以百万计的游客。
3.再到昆明游览云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接触多种不同的少数民族文化（minority cultures）。
要求：1.必须包括以上要点，可适当补充 2.词数120左右
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Yours,
Li Hua

答案

Dear Emily，
Glad to hear from you. You have asked me for my advice on travelling in Yunnan. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters. Not only can you experience Naxi culture but also you can see different styles of outdoor bars.  Besides, it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. It is filled with world-class sights and sceneries, which draws millions of tourists every year. Moreover, having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice. You can get in touch with a variety of minority cultures of China.
I hope you will have a good time travelling. I am looking forward to hearing from you and can hardly wait to share your joy of the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：本文是一篇应用文。让学生写书信是高考中，常见的题材形式。学生感到很熟悉。成文时应该注意以下几点：1.书信内容要齐全。（1）可到丽江小镇。这里海拔约2500米，在这里体验纳西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的户外酒吧(bar)。（2）再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）这里每年都吸引数以百万计的游客。（3）再到昆明游览云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接触多种不同的少数民族文化（minority cultures）。2.人称：第一人称；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
【亮点说明】文章使用了从句：I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters.  it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. 高级句型：not only。。。but also。。。 非谓语动词短语：having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice.   It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions. 短语：looking forward to；have a good time；get in touch with；pay a visit to；hear from；插入语及连词的使用：To begin with, Besides, Moreover。