题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

昨晚，本市的一座办公楼发生火灾。假设你是一名校报记者，请根据以下提示用英语为校报写一篇报道，介绍火灾情况。
时间：昨晚9点
火情：1. 火焰夹杂黑色浓烟从六楼冒出
2. 有煤气罐（gas tank）爆炸声 (explosion)
3. 据说大火从一楼开始逐渐转到楼顶
4. 一些窗户和砖墙因为火灾的高温而倒塌
死亡：无死亡发生
救援：1. 许多消防队员和消防车（ fire engines）迅速赶到
2. 花了近两个小时才把火扑灭
注意：1. 有标题
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；      3. 词数：120词左右

答案

A Terrible Fire
A big fire happened in one office building in our city at about nine o’clock last night.
In the beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank. It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.
Some windows and brick walls were burnt down because of the heat of the fire. Many people stood outside on the streets watching the fire in horror. Many firemen and fore engines came quickly. Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.

解析

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这篇作文的提纲很详细，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文中用了词组：burn down烧毁， because of因为，in horror.惊恐的，break out爆发， In the beginning,和一些复杂的句型： we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank.这句话用了with复合结构。 It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.这句话用了固定句型It was said that和现在分词做状语， Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. 这句话用现在分词做定语，It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.这句话用了it做形式主语。