题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。假设你是李华，最近你校对“中学生如何交友？”的话题展开讨论，大家发表了不同的看法。请你根据下面所给内容，写一封信给《21世纪报　高中生版》“Your Words”栏目，反映讨论情况。并说明你对如何交友的看法。

为何交友	建立良好的人际关系，构建和谐社会
交友对象	学习上的朋友	互帮互学，促进提高……
	生活上的朋友	互助互利，摆脱困境……
	情感上的朋友	倾诉烦恼，分享喜悦……
如何交友	(联系自己，拟定内容，列举两至三点。)

注意：1.对所给要点，不要简单翻译；2.词数150左右。开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends. ......
Yours ever,  
Li Hua

答案

Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.
Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems. In addition, others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.
What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.T o make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances. Besides, we need to be friendly and care about them.When disagreement does occur, it"s wise of us to talk it over to others. In brief, making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves.
Yours ever,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文出现很多好的句型：Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.这句话用了宾语从句，As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，    Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. 这句话用了定语从句和虚拟语气，Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.这句话用了过去分词做定语，Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems.这句话用了让步状语从句， What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句，To make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances.这句话用了目的状语， When disagreement does occur, it"s wise of us to talk it over to others. 这句话用了it做形式主语，making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves. 这句话用了动名词做主语，还有范文还使用了In addition, Besides, In brief,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。