题目

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某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为“梦想点亮人生（Dream Lighten Life)”。请你用英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投搞。要点如下：
1.你的梦想是什么；
2.阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同；
3.你认为实现梦想需要什么。
注意：
词数80----120；
不能使用个人具实姓名和学校名称。

答案

One possible version：
Dreams Lighten Life
Dreams can make us powerful and different. It is good to make an effort to make our dreams comc true.
I have been dreaming of becoming a doctor since childhood. Each time I see someone suffering from a disease, I feel sympathy for them. Also. I really admire doctors, for they can help patients by using their professional knowledge. I know if I want to become a doctor. I need to master the essential medical knowledge and accumulate a great deal of experience. Keeping this dreain in mind. I need to take action to realize it. As a middle school student. I know I should work hard right now to master some basic knowledge and try my best to enter a good medical university. This is how my dream can lighten my life. Now I have a goal to fight for! My life has become completely different.
Admittedly, it is not easy to realize our dreams. I think the most important thing is that we stick to them and never give up. Apart from this, we should also use the right method.

解析

本文是一篇给出了简单汉语提示的作文。每个人都有梦想，把梦想写出来并写出梦想的作用。这符合中学生的实际，让每个人都有话可写。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容齐全：（1）你的梦想是什么；（2）阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同；（3）你认为实现梦想需要什么。2.人称：以第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.注意使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。