题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
[ 写作内容 ]
位置 | 美丽的海滨城市厦门 |
开放时间 | 2013年4月28日 |
面积 | 约240公顷 |
特色 | 以科幻和互动体验而出名,将高科技与中国传统文化相融合,创造出一个充满 幻想和刺激的神奇天地 |
主要活动 | 精彩表演、多种娱乐活动 |
公顷 hectare 科幻 science fiction 互动interaction 高科技 high-tech
[写作要求]
1.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数;
2.必须用5个句子表达全部所给的内容;
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear Kate ,
I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you
Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Juan
答案
Dear Kate,
I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you.
Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom, which lies in Xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. The kingdom, opened on April 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. The theme park is famous for science fiction and interaction experience. What’s more, by combining high-tech with traditional Chinese culture, the kingdom creates a magic world full of fantasies and excitement. You can take part in a variety of entertainments and enjoy performances there.
Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Juan
解析
试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文很好的表达了要点的内容,使用了一些很好的词组和句型:be famous for 因为…而著名,combine… with…将…和…结合起来, take part in 参加,a variety of各种各样的, looking forward to 盼望,Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom, which lies in Xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句,The kingdom, opened on April 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. 这句话使用了过去分词做定语,还有范文使用了What’s more这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
核心考点
试题【厦门方特梦幻王国(Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom)是我国新建的一座大型主题公园。假设你叫张娟,请根据以下内容给外国朋友凯特写一封邮件,介】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
Teenagers’ secrets should be kept to themselves and no one else, their parents included, has the right to stick their nose into their private life.
As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically(心理上). They are curious about and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their body and mind. What’s more, exposed to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin following the example of adults’ behaviors in secret. Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair and care more about what to wear. Some even begin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without letting their parents know. They are doing all this in secret because they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that, if found out by their parent, they will get misunderstood and even punished. In fact, in many cases, parents can not deal with such matters well but hurt their children’s feelings badly, making children unwilling to communicate with them any more. When this happens, it terribly hurts feelings of the family as well.
Therefore, it sounds reasonable and acceptable that teenagers should keep their secrets to themselves instead of sharing them with their parents, who should give them the freedom in dealing with secrets.
一些同学赞同 | 一些同学反对 | 你自己的观点 |
●更好地了解太空 | ●耗资巨大 | ●? |
●从太空获得新资源 | ●宇航员的安全问题 | |
●扩大人类的生存空间 | |
2. 标题与开头已写好,不计入总词数。
提示词:宇航员:astronauts 生存空间: living space
Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO?
The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over
1. 成员中有三名男生和两名女生,均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈;
2. 每周周末排练是否足够?初期演唱的音乐宜多元化还是一种风格?
3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会?
4. 希望他能为乐队取个名字。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. e-mail的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Cousins,
Since you are a well-known musician,
Best wishes
乐观的态度;2. 努力学习;3. 参加锻炼。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 开头已为你写好。
Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve it?____________________
An elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree. A small fly came,flying and buzzing (嗡嗡叫) near his ear. The elephant waved it away with his long ears. Then the fly came again, and the elephant waved it away once more.
This was repeated several times. Then the elephant asked the fly, “Why are you so restless and noisy? Why can’t you stay for a while in one place? ”
The fly answered, “I am attracted to whatever I see, hear or smell. My five senses pull me constantly in all directions and I cannot resist them.What is your secret? How can you stay so calm and still?”
The elephant stopped eating and said, “My five senses do not rule my attention. Whatever I do, I get involved in it. Now that I am eating, I am completely absorbed in eating. In this way I can enjoy my food and chew it better. I rule and control my attention, and not the other way around. So when you are in charge of your five senses and attention, your mind will become calm, too.”
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括短文的内容;
2、然后以约120个词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1)看完故事后的感受及启发;
(2)描述一段你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的不愉快经历;
(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注、专心。
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
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